考研英语大作文精讲（五）
图
折线图
上升—上升程度
下降—下降程度
为何会总体上升（下降）？
未来趋势？
change
What is illustrated in the chart clearly shows that changes have taken place with the number of undergraduates who choose to take the postgraduate entrance examination in China.
What is illustrated in the chart clearly shows that changes have taken place with the number of undergraduates who choose to take the postgraduate entrance examination in China.Based on the data given, generally speaking, we can see that
上升：rise from 2015 to 2018，jump from over 1.6 million to approximately 2.4 million
下降：一点点，不明显 decline in the year 2014 and 2015
What is illustrated in the chart clearly shows that changes have taken place with the number of undergraduates who choose to take the postgraduate entrance examination in China.Based on the data given, generally speaking, we can see that the number of college students participating in the admission examination for graduates is on the rise especially from 2015 to 2018， jumping from over 1.6 million to approximately 2.4 million , despite the fact that there is a decline in the year 2014 and 2015.
为什么会出现图中数字的变化
剖析成因
新事物类
外与内—普适性
社会经济 政策推进民众态度
To begin with , the change is closely related to the rising income of Chinese people . More importantly , with the increasing pace of modern life, people’s view on their own life has changed dramatically .
Last but not least , the change is enhanced and promoted by the government’s better policies in the … … field .
Food or clothing shortages no longer threaten the 1.4billion Chinese , and more than 850 million Chinese are out of poverty . Nine-year compulsory education is provided across the country , and China’s universal health care system and social security system lead the world in scale .
相关性
在经济社会发展的背景下
大学生或面对严峻挑战
或自发选择深造
The contributory factors accounting for this trend can mainly be summarized into two points.
The contributory factors accounting for this trend can mainly be summarized into two points.First and foremost,along with economic and social development,
The contributory factors accounting for this trend can mainly be summarized into two points.First and foremost,along with economic and social development,college graduates nowadays are confronted with a great deal of intense competition and employment pressure as well as great challenges posed by their peers,
The contributory factors accounting for this trend can mainly be summarized into two points.First and foremost,along with economic and social development,college graduates nowadays are confronted with a great deal of intense competition and employment pressure as well as great challenges posed by their peers,thus they decide to continue their studies to enhance their competitiveness.
For another thing,indeed, a number of college students who have real enthusiasm for academic achievements are willing and ready to dedicate themselves to the cultural and intellectual development.Hence they are determined to pursue further education and get a master degree so as to make adequate preparations for their future academic researches.
The contributory factors accounting for this trend can mainly be summarized into two points.First and foremost,along with economic and social development,college graduates nowadays are confronted with a great deal of intense competition and employment pressure as well as great challenges posed by their peers,thus they decide to continue their studies to enhance their competitiveness.For another thing,indeed, a number of college students who have real enthusiasm for academic achievements are willing and ready to dedicate themselves to the cultural and intellectual development.Hence they are determined to pursue further education and get a master degree so as to make adequate preparations for their future academic researches.
第三段
呼吁建议劝勉+趋势
考研数量一定会继续上升
From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that the increasing trend is bound to continue in the years to come. From my perspective,it is a positive trend and should be encouraged, for it is not only beneficial for the educational attainments of college students but also conducive to the scientific and cultural progress of the society.
What is illustrated in the chart clearly shows that changes have taken place with the number of undergraduates who choose to take the postgraduate entrance examination in China.Based on the data given, generally speaking, we can see that the number of college students participating in the admission examination for graduates is on the rise especially from 2015 to 2018， jumping from over 1.6 million to approximately 2.4 million,despite the fact that there is a decline in the year 2014 and 2015.
The contributory factors accounting for this trend can mainly be summarized into two points.First and foremost,along with economic and social development,college graduates nowadays are confronted with a great deal of intense competition and employment pressure as well as great challenges posed by their peers,thus they decide to continue their studies to enhance their competitiveness.For another thing,indeed, a number of college students who have real enthusiasm for academic achievements are willing and ready to dedicate themselves to the cultural and intellectual development.Hence they are determined to pursue further education and get a master degree so as to make adequate preparations for their future academic researches.
From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that the increasing trend is bound to continue in the years to come. From my perspective,it is a positive trend and should be encouraged, for it is not only beneficial for the educational attainments of college students but also conducive to the scientific and cultural progress of the society.
备胎句式复习
On one hand ,in our highly competitive society ,whether one is in China or the US, it can be said that it is impossible for a person to find a good job with a promising future without at least 主题 . On the other hand ,it has long been an accepted fact that 主题 is a pre-requisite for finding a good job or a promising career .
例：On one hand ,in our highly competitive society ,whether one is in China or the US, it can be said that it is impossible for a person to find a good job with a promising future without at least a college degree . On the other hand ,it has long been an accepted fact that a higher degree is a pre-requisite for finding a good job or a promising career .
复习：饼状图的写法
As is vividly shown in the graph,
基础描述：the total … is divided into four parts，A makes up 34%，51% stands for B，9% refers to C，6% is defined as D.
A over one third ; Nearly one tenth; over a half; The rest; respectively
【万能句式】The total … is divided into four parts, with A, B, C and D making up % % % and % respectively.
The total … is divided into four parts, with A and B making up % totally.
总结：尽管图中的数字看起来是孤立存在的,但事实上他们是紧密相连的。
【万能句式】Isolated as the figures seem to be, as a matter of fact, they are connected to one another closely.
As is clearly mirrored in the above pie chart, the proportion of ways for shoppers to obtain the product information demonstrates evident distinctions in 2017. According to the data given, the Internet advertisement takes a lion’s share, accounting for 40%. While TV commercials and flyers take away respectively 22% and 18% of the whole proportion.
成因：多的为什么多，少的为什么少
What triggers this phenomenon? It is not difficult to put forward several factors responsible for this. Initially, with the accelerated advancement of the Internet technology, the increase of netizens is apparently noticed by us. Thus, numerous individuals tend to buy products online instead of going for the real shop in the streets or shopping malls.
What triggers this phenomenon? It is not difficult to put forward several factors responsible for this. Initially, with the accelerated advancement of the Internet technology, the increase of netizens is apparently noticed by us. Thus, numerous individuals tend to buy products online instead of going for the real shop in the streets or shopping malls. To continue, TVs are still widely in use for most families, which supports a strong purchase power by TV commercials. Terminally, quite a few folks are giving out flyers to the passers-by, and most of them would like to accept it, and this is the very reason why flyers rank the third in the pie chart.
In view of the arguments above, we can conclude that the current phenomenon is of no surprise. And therefore, it can be predicted that the network way will undoubtedly advance in the years ahead.
As is clearly mirrored in the above pie chart, the proportion of ways for shoppers to obtain the product information demonstrates evident distinctions in 2014. According to the data given, the Internet advertisement takes a lion’s share, accounting for 40%. While TV commercials and flyers take away respectively 22% and 18% of the whole proportion.
What triggers this phenomenon? It is not difficult to put forward several factors responsible for this. Initially, with the accelerated advancement of the Internet technology, the increase of netizens is apparently noticed by us. Thus, numerous individuals tend to buy products online instead of going for the real shop in the streets or shopping malls. To continue, TVs are still widely in use for most families, which supports a strong purchase power by TV commercials. Terminally, quite a few folks are giving out flyers to the passers-by, and most of them would like to accept it, and this is the very reason why flyers rank the third in the pie chart.
In view of the arguments above, we can conclude that the current phenomenon is of no surprise. And therefore, it can be predicted that the network way will undoubtedly advance in the years ahead.
复习：柱状图
①Compared with…is still increased by…
②The number of…grew / rose from…to…
③An increase is shown in…;then came a sharp increase of…
④In…the number remains the same / drops to…
⑤There was a very slight(small / slow / gradual)rise / increase in 1990.
⑥There was a very steady ( marked / sharp / rapid / sudden / dramatic)drop(decrease / decline / fall / reduction)in 1998 / compared with that of last year ).
From the bar chart given above, we can observe that the way of payment in a certain city of China has experienced a dramatic change in the 3 years from 2015 to 2017. The share of way of payment in cash declined dramatically from 80% in 2015 to 30% in 2017, while taking a look at the statistics of that in wechat and Alipay , we can see that it ascended gradually from 20% in 2015 to the maximum at 70% in 2017.
What exactly contributes to this phenomenon? Reasons can be listed as follows: the authorities in developing countries have issued some relevant but preferential policies to protect and promote the development of the new technology,as a result of which is emerging ways of payment. Moreover, with the widespread application of the new ways, people in mounting numbers can afford to buy daily commodities which were once deemed impossible. What’s more, as regards their safety, it is under control in organization involved.
The trend that new ways of payment will occupy the increasing part of our market will remain in the coming years. To keep the market in a splendid state, it is imperative and essential for the authorities concerned to take proper actions to regulate the trading operation and keep a close watch on the consumer market.
From the bar chart given above, we can observe that the way of payment in a certain city of China has experienced a dramatic change in the 3 years from 2015 to 2017. The share of way of payment in cash declined dramatically from 80% in 2015 to 30% in 2017, while taking a look at the statistics of that in wechat and Alipay , we can see that it ascended gradually from 20% in 2015 to the maximum at 70% in 2017.
What exactly contributes to this phenomenon? Reasons can be listed as follows: the authorities in developing countries have issued some relevant but preferential policies to protect and promote the development of the new technology,as a result of which is emerging ways of payment. Moreover, with the widespread application of the new ways, people in mounting numbers can afford to buy daily commodities which were once deemed impossible. What’s more, as regards their safety, it is under control in organization involved.
The trend that new ways of payment will occupy the increasing part of our market will remain in the coming years. To keep the market in a splendid state, it is imperative and essential for the authorities concerned to take proper actions to regulate the trading operation and keep a close watch on the consumer market.
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